![]() ![]() Surely, the book is going to end in the next five minutes? *Checks Audible player* "Two more hours." More tending. Then, the next scene had tending! Which is describing a transfer of soul energy through touching. I feel like a victim of a war crime painfully but dutifully reliving my experience, so the next generation of reader can live a better life. ![]() The magic mechanic in this fantasy setting is a euphemism for First Base. ![]() In this book, someone says "Do you trust me?" "Yes." "Okay." And the character was right to. Then conflict, rising action, resolution, and voila: they are together. In a good story, girl expects boy to say A, he says B. She needs to read "Story" by Robert McKee, and then with her writing talent, would become one hell of a writer. And this author is a good writer! A storyteller? In time. But then why was my soul screaming for it to end? 1) Who the $#&! is this supposed to be for? Trying to come up with an answer that sounds less judgmental and failing. Layout, dialog, exposition, narration by Travis Baldree: all strengths. ![]() What gets me is this book has a lot going for it. Or I fought a Balrog and fell into a deep pit for eternity. And yes, I listened to this book, beginning to end. Reading this turned me into Gandalf the White. Don't Know Who I'm Mad at More: The Author or Me ![]()
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